Intro Paragraph

Hey, guys today I will be sharing with you, my intro paragraph to my transformation essay.

As seen in Elie, Muhmmad, and Scout's stories they are all abused verbally or mentaly or in some cases both. Through all of their adversaties all three of these characters find away to come out on top and find a way to change the people's lifes they have interacted with. All of the adversates have changed these peoples lifes in all sorts of ways that these people will never be able to erase from their mermory or life style. All in all these three individuals have changed their life and other lifes around them making them transformers of the world.

Hey, guys!

Today I will be talking about what innovation I think have changed the world the most.

I think that one of the biggest innovations that has changed the world is the smartphone. The reason I think this is because the smartphone enables so much accessing the web, playing music, and most importantly staying in touch with people via text/social media.  The smartphone has changed the world in a good way and a bad one. The good is people know what's going on in the world and what you friends are doing. The bad is that people take advantage of others that they may or may not know and abusing them online and getting away with it. So there is a good and bad to everything and I think with the smartphone more good than bad has come out of it and that is why I think the smartphone is an innovation that has changed the world.